Today we did some revision work on our essays using the following set of tasks:
Once you get your written response from your partner, use that insight to begin revisions on your own work.
Also, consider all of the questions that I ask on today’s activity. these are the things I’m focusing on when I grade the essays.
Tomorrow we will have a comma lesson & a semi-colon lesson.
Your next typed & printed draft is due in class on Thursday.